I have a new mission. I have recently realized that my writing has become more confusing and complicated the 'smarter' I get. I have therefore resorted to taking a step back and simplifying it. I will start by trying to shorten my sentences. I will proceed by making sure my ideas are complete. I have this bad habit of writing half of what I'm thinking. I somehow assume that the reader lives in my mind and can see the other half floating around in there. Under this assumption, everyone can understand me perfectly at all times. I know that this is not so. How am I doing so far? I hope this works. Quite frankly, I feel like my writing has developed a case of the hiccups.
I'm annoyed. I just realized that only two of my sentences above don't start with the word 'I'. I'll be back when I have something better to say--when I'm done talking about myself. At that point I will try this again.
Thanks for attending this episode in the development of Riccardo Lo Monaco. Go fix something about you now.
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